Another "last chance" story. JWS and I seem to have some experience with that subject.
The comma after "last" keeps throwing me off. I can't quite figure out how to read that first phrase.
I do like "softly" though. I think it gives the character some depth. He knows this is his last chance, and he's taking a step to make sure it counts. He's trying to change, I think.
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Another "last chance" story. JWS and I seem to have some experience with that subject.
The comma after "last" keeps throwing me off. I can't quite figure out how to read that first phrase.
I do like "softly" though. I think it gives the character some depth. He knows this is his last chance, and he's taking a step to make sure it counts. He's trying to change, I think.
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